http://rheo-tu.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] rheo-tu.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] volynska 2015-08-04 07:02 pm (UTC)

Почти весь рассказ атмосферен и заметно напоминает "Цвет из иных миров". Но вот окончание... оно совершенно иное и какое-то скомканное. Мне не хватило более полного раскрытия темы.
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